just excellent. after a month-long hiatus from the saiyuki yaoi community, this story was just what i needed to jump back into the fray! i even feel inspired to write more saiyuki yaoi myself!

please finish this fic, i'm quite involved with the characters and the story now! your gojyo and hakkai are hilarious, and you've actually done more to show sanzo's character by leaving his (surely conflicting) thoughts and emotions unsaid. can't wait for the ending! =^.^=