NO, I think that Heeros reactions were perfect. They really suited him. I often get needlessly embarrassed for the characters when I think that they are going to make fools out of themselves but I never had that problem with Hellfire Heero.

OOh and I forgot to say this last time. I like you use of Religion in your fic. Probably because I enjoy hopelessly twisting religion my self. I think it comes from going to a Catholic Highschool. At least now I know that you won't be offended by my crackpot religious theories. I was planing on sending them to you along with your gift (which I have but have not sent) since I can't draw T_T

Also: T.T I shudder to think of what they will do to His Dark Materials. I love those books so much and am very scared at the moment.