Ha ha! Just as lovely as the first time I read it. ^__~
I like the little tidbits you added here and there, but that's not the important part.
The important part is how a-frickin-dorable it is to think of Sanzo and Goku sitting in a cute little cafe together, eating sweets. They sounded yummy! And I love your confident Goku. You know I just love him to pieces. *squeezes the monkey*
And the dance! OH the dance! I loved the idea of Goku dancing like that, dressed in such an adorable outfit. *coughitneedsapicturecough* And the conversation between Gojyo and Hakkai? Brilliant. The plot thickens!
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Date: 2007-11-29 08:55 pm (UTC)I like the little tidbits you added here and there, but that's not the important part.
The important part is how a-frickin-dorable it is to think of Sanzo and Goku sitting in a cute little cafe together, eating sweets. They sounded yummy! And I love your confident Goku. You know I just love him to pieces. *squeezes the monkey*
And the dance! OH the dance! I loved the idea of Goku dancing like that, dressed in such an adorable outfit. *coughitneedsapicturecough* And the conversation between Gojyo and Hakkai? Brilliant. The plot thickens!
I still love this story so very, very much. <3