I agree with Pip; Goku does need a mobile, not a complete teen until he has one xD
You've written in her POV too (well not exactly but you get what I mean). That was really nice of you to give her some screening time because, honestly, she really deserves it.
Oh, and your evil plans to get me back have worked, now you can safely confirm that world domination is possible for you ^.~
Also, Sanzo-love is so teeth rotting. I'm soo glad that Goku was human enough to enjoy it and feel special. Anyways, I can and cannot wait for your next chapter, seeing as there is the chance that you'll leave another cliff-hanger. Great read though! *absolutely adores your writing* *______*
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Date: 2009-06-19 11:21 pm (UTC)You've written in her POV too (well not exactly but you get what I mean). That was really nice of you to give her some screening time because, honestly, she really deserves it.
Oh, and your evil plans to get me back have worked, now you can safely confirm that world domination is possible for you ^.~
Also, Sanzo-love is so teeth rotting. I'm soo glad that Goku was human enough to enjoy it and feel special. Anyways, I can and cannot wait for your next chapter, seeing as there is the chance that you'll leave another cliff-hanger. Great read though! *absolutely adores your writing* *______*